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KHS Chpt. 1 redoneKonoha high          By  Sir Drake Chester Is’hyperalot   
 
 
 
   "Holy crap... this place..." My voice faltered. My mind stumbled as it tried to sort through the hundreds of words in my extensive vocabulary for the right one to perfectly describe this building in front of me. Huge? No, too normal. Gigantic? No, even that seemed to downsize it. The biggest freaking building to ever be called a school?     It would have to do.     I stood before this indescribably large school with my jaw hanging open. It was KHS Chpt. 1 redone
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Konoha High School Chpt. 61Konoha high          By  Sir Drake Chester Is’hyperalot   
 
 
   Chapter 61: "It was time to prepare my mental state."  [Chouji]   
    ... Epilogue...  Part 2   
 
 
 
   The last battle I was victorious and escaped with only few injuries. The next time I would fight would have a different outcome now that I've created a new plan. This time it will be a sneak attack. I will get my treasures without any disruption.     Today was the day for the next battl Konoha High School Chpt. 61
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Konoha High School Chpt. 60Konoha high          By  Sir Drake Chester Is’hyperalot   
 
 
   Chapter 60: "I'm at the start of a new book at this point in time, and it'll just keep getting better."  [Yuzuki]   
    ... Epilogue...  Part 1   
 
 
 
   Here I am.     Standing out in front of my true home. School's out for the summer and I passed with flying colors, which almost came to me as a surprise. Sasuke is back to his normal self, though he's a lot more considerate towards Itach Konoha High School Chpt. 60
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KHS 1st chapter redo.

Sun Sep 20, 2009, 4:33 PM
  • Mood: Pirate
  • Listening to: Tune up remix - Cascada
  • Reading: New Chapter 1
  • Watching: Pirate dude
  • Playing: Alto Saxophone
  • Eating: Nothing
  • Drinking: Water
I'm about to upload the redone version of Konoha High School's first chapter. I want everyone's opinion and critique on it. Tell me if it's just fine for a first chapter, too long, or if there's anything kind of weird. I would highly appreciate all the help I can get.

Basically, all these revisions I'll be doing to Konoha High School will help with the sequal I do plan on eventually writing. I want these to be fun chapters for people to read.

So anything from structure to organization or anything you can think of.

Thank you all. =)

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  • Current Residence: Earth
  • Interests: Fantasy, anime, sci-fi, poetry, baseball, track n field, stuff...
  • Favourite movie: The Patriot
  • Favourite genre of music: Rock
  • Favourite artist: Melanie Sibamba
  • Favourite cartoon character: Sasuke and Itachi Uchiha, Sai, Naru, Byakuya Kuchiki, and Mai Taniyama
  • Personal Quote: Live for tomorrow, 'cause todays attempts at life carry over.
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~magaman11 Sep 20, 2009, 4:43:37 PM
Chyo deary deary, we need to get back in touch. (That and I wanna rp with you in naruto style sometime hehe.) mrc_faucher@yahoo.com
I'm always on durring my 0 period
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~x-Just-a-memory-x Sep 20, 2009, 10:34:02 PM
Seriously. That would be awesome. I really have missed you! I'm... online whenever I'm online.... which is normally in the evening, lol.

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Mood: Joy ~Tora-Unade Aug 11, 2009, 11:08:24 PM
*poke poke*
RAWR!
HIIII!!!!
How are you wifey!
X3

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~x-Just-a-memory-x Aug 12, 2009, 11:21:05 AM
I'm very good! And sore... went canoeing for the first time yesterday!
GAO!!!
How 'bout you?

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Sir Drake Chester Is\'hyperalot
NARUTO fanfic writer
Female
Proud Photoshop Elements User! =D
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~Tora-Unade Aug 16, 2009, 8:26:34 PM
I'm alright. I'm just mainly at home all the time. I just realized that I need to upload a lot of pictures.

X3

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~tabby-like-a-cat Jun 24, 2009, 9:30:35 AM
thank you for the fave! i appreciate it!

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Mood: Humiliated ~Hyperballoforeos May 11, 2009, 4:43:10 PM
I feel kinda stupid for asking you this but do you know how to put stories on here?
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~x-Just-a-memory-x May 11, 2009, 8:56:34 PM
Yeah. And it's no problem, I've been asked this before.

When you go to submit a deviation, you DON'T click on "Add a file..." unless you want some sort of image to go with your story.
Click on "Add text..." and copy and paste your story to the window that pops up when you click it. It's good to keep whatever program you use to save your story in with that particular story open and ready to edit so that the copying and pasting is a lot easier.
And it's as simple as that. So keep on working on that story I assume you're writing and I would very much like to read it. :D

Good luck!
x-DC-x

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Sir Drake Chester Is\'hyperalot
NARUTO fanfic writer
Female
Proud Photoshop Elements User! =D
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~x-Just-a-memory-x May 12, 2009, 2:53:35 PM
No problem. Were you able to get your story up?

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Sir Drake Chester Is\'hyperalot
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Proud Photoshop Elements User! =D
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